Date: 2008-08-02 05:54 pm (UTC)
Very nicely written. I loved Carlisle's sense of longing for his humanity here; you really managed to get that across well.

One minor little detail is that it's very hard to read the pale purple text on a dark purple background without using the ?style=mine trick.

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