1-1 (Specs)

[interpretthis]

Feeling artsy.  Finally decided to start 100poems.  So we're beginning with a bit of cliché fun, though I feel some angst coming on ;)

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what do you see when you look at me?

what shade do i make your specs today?

cause i can tell you

oh, i can tell you

fact won’t come into play

i keep some things to myself

inside

and I  hope they don’t show

oh, i hope they don’t show

you look at me

i ask, what do you see?

and the crowded world in its multi-colored specs

always sees something else

Comments

[skinny-bacon.livejournal.com]

This is so completely wonderful. You're a poet! It didn't seem cliched at all. It has such a wonderful rhythm.

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much :)
I'm always very self-conscious about my writing, but poetry is definitely the worst of the lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it - I'll try to have more up soon :)

[skinny-bacon.livejournal.com]

It was great! No reason to be self-conscious at all.

i keep some things to myself
inside
and I hope they don’t show
oh, i hope they don’t show

Very simple but so pure. Loverly.

and the crowded world in its multi-colored specs
always sees something else

Triple love. Perception is an astonishing thing when you think about it and I love the imagery you used here.

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

Wow, thanks again :)
And yes, perception is amazing.
I've got another poem coming tonight if you're interested :) I had much fun with the angst. Somehow angst makes everything more addictive :)

[skinny-bacon.livejournal.com]

Sometimes it truly seems like angst is the water that turns the wheel of the world.....

Ugh. That was me being poetic. I think I'll go hide now. :)

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

Aw, don't hide.
*grins*
You've got a nice point.

[skinny-bacon.livejournal.com]

Thanks!
BTW, have I told you Icon!Love yet? Because the colouring on that one is just magical.

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

Thanks ;) - lantiscod
*pets and drools on icon*

[orangeokapi13.livejournal.com]

Tres tres awesome!

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

Merci beaucoup :)

[lantiscod.livejournal.com]

WOW~~~ You wrote poems...I haven't even tried that thing so far...*g*...Sounds nice~~

read?...see?...I'm thinking about the difference?

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

:)
Thanks.