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Jan. 25th, 2007 03:43 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
interpretthisFeeling artsy. Finally decided to start ![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png)
100poems. So we're beginning with a bit of cliché fun, though I feel some angst coming on ;)
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100poems. So we're beginning with a bit of cliché fun, though I feel some angst coming on ;)---
what do you see when you look at me?
what shade do i make your specs today?
cause i can tell you
oh, i can tell you
fact won’t come into play
i keep some things to myself
inside
and I hope they don’t show
oh, i hope they don’t show
you look at me
i ask, what do you see?
and the crowded world in its multi-colored specs
always sees something else
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Date: 2007-01-26 02:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-26 03:24 am (UTC)I'm always very self-conscious about my writing, but poetry is definitely the worst of the lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it - I'll try to have more up soon :)
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Date: 2007-01-26 03:49 am (UTC)i keep some things to myself
inside
and I hope they don’t show
oh, i hope they don’t show
Very simple but so pure. Loverly.
and the crowded world in its multi-colored specs
always sees something else
Triple love. Perception is an astonishing thing when you think about it and I love the imagery you used here.
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Date: 2007-01-26 03:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-26 03:55 am (UTC)read?...see?...I'm thinking about the difference?
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Date: 2007-01-26 03:56 am (UTC)And yes, perception is amazing.
I've got another poem coming tonight if you're interested :) I had much fun with the angst. Somehow angst makes everything more addictive :)
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Date: 2007-01-26 03:59 am (UTC)Ugh. That was me being poetic. I think I'll go hide now. :)
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Date: 2007-01-26 03:59 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-26 04:00 am (UTC)Thanks.
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Date: 2007-01-26 04:02 am (UTC)*grins*
You've got a nice point.
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Date: 2007-01-26 04:08 am (UTC)BTW, have I told you Icon!Love yet? Because the colouring on that one is just magical.
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Date: 2007-01-26 04:11 am (UTC)*pets and drools on icon*