Wow. Oh, dude, WOW! This was so great! I was so excited when I saw you posted a Ben fic and this was SO great!
The corner of his right lip twisted up and he took a cynical look at his mental scoreboard: Hope 0, Doubt 1. He knew already who would win in the end.
Love this! That is totally something that would be going on in Ben's brain.
You totally had me believing Ben was being buried alive. I was completely convinced and screaming at my computer with my mind! And then all the imagery with the blood was great. Blood everywhere and Ben did not know where to look. So perfect.
And the repeated mention of the nail in the coffin, expecially when Juliet was smiling at him, was PERFECT!!!!! Absolutely right-on brilliant.
This was so great. So Great!. Can you believe it will be back this week??? That is so crazy! I am so excited.
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Date: 2007-02-04 03:09 pm (UTC)The corner of his right lip twisted up and he took a cynical look at his mental scoreboard: Hope 0, Doubt 1. He knew already who would win in the end.
Love this! That is totally something that would be going on in Ben's brain.
You totally had me believing Ben was being buried alive. I was completely convinced and screaming at my computer with my mind! And then all the imagery with the blood was great. Blood everywhere and Ben did not know where to look. So perfect.
And the repeated mention of the nail in the coffin, expecially when Juliet was smiling at him, was PERFECT!!!!! Absolutely right-on brilliant.
This was so great. So Great!. Can you believe it will be back this week??? That is so crazy! I am so excited.
Great job. Write more!!! :)