Oh wow. wowowowowowow! Oh my goodness. You are my hero! This was every shade of brilliance I have ever read. Absolutely amazing. The beginning completely captivated me; I adored your allusions and references to monsters and Ben's experiences and feelings. Cave = awesome. Evil!Juliet = LOVELOVELOVEAWESOME!!!! Completely amazing. I really really loved this.
Lines that stuck otu to me.
Be more cunning, merciless, manipulative than everyone else and monsters become a triviality.
But different, softer, enigmatic monsters hid behind the flashy ones, and sometimes through careful deliberation, cleverness, and malice they found a way to win.
Her cool breath spawned a web of jolts that crawled from his neck to his breastbone.
Why, it was nearly as cold as the woman clutching his pained shoulders.
And the end was simply amazing. Beautiful. I loved this. So. Much. *super great big hugs*
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Date: 2007-02-27 04:13 am (UTC)Lines that stuck otu to me.
Be more cunning, merciless, manipulative than everyone else and monsters become a triviality.
But different, softer, enigmatic monsters hid behind the flashy ones, and sometimes through careful deliberation, cleverness, and malice they found a way to win.
Her cool breath spawned a web of jolts that crawled from his neck to his breastbone.
Why, it was nearly as cold as the woman clutching his pained shoulders.
And the end was simply amazing. Beautiful. I loved this. So. Much. *super great big hugs*