Excellent job. I like the beginning, where Ben sort of holds himself above it all, like none of it can touch him. You also do a very good job of capturing his voice, so simple, like in that sentence that begins "Why, it was..." That's so him and it's so subtly done.
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Date: 2007-03-17 02:27 am (UTC)