Nothing to fight for. He grips Michael closer and rethinks his statement.
Seems like Alex did find something to fight for, didn't he?
Gorgeous and extremely hot ficcy as usual. You really managed to show their desperation here. And you just gotta love humping and Alex biting his lip in pleasure!!
Um... Just one thing though, regarding songfics. I've noticed that it's generally better to put on all the lyrics at the start of the fic to set the mood, because putting them in the middle just makes people skip them to get to the actual story paragraph. I do that, and pretty much all other readers that I know do that.
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Date: 2007-04-25 07:36 am (UTC)Seems like Alex did find something to fight for, didn't he?
Gorgeous and extremely hot ficcy as usual. You really managed to show their desperation here. And you just gotta love humping and Alex biting his lip in pleasure!!
Um... Just one thing though, regarding songfics. I've noticed that it's generally better to put on all the lyrics at the start of the fic to set the mood, because putting them in the middle just makes people skip them to get to the actual story paragraph. I do that, and pretty much all other readers that I know do that.