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[interpretthis]

Risible

your moment smells like

chocolate and rain

your favorite

and all you can do is laugh

and laugh and laugh,

cause you’ve never

lived this one before

Waking
 

soft sunlight

on faded curtains

peers through

into your solace

and wakes you from

your dream

EDIT: Knocked the third (poem) from the lineup.  Didn't like it much at all.

Comments

[skinny-bacon.livejournal.com]

I am totally loving all of your poetry. It is so evocative and simple in its descriptions. I love it.

"cause you’ve never
lived this one before."

And this was great. And the entire second poem. Wonderful.

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much :)
I'm still not sure how I feel about these, but it's good to know they're appreciated. And Prison Break...*g*...more on this later. Probably tomorrow, as I have unfortunate things like homework to deal with first. *sigh*
Thanks again, it means a lot!

[franlock.livejournal.com]

I love the poem! The way you use words is creative and interesting. Keep up the good work!

[interpretthis.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much :)
I'm glad you enjoyed them!