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Jan. 25th, 2007 09:27 pmraindrops pound my window
tiny translucent fists
melting down glass
i blink
and the only discernible difference
between the drops
and my tears
stays the pounding of the tiny fists
on the window
to the silent course my tears flow
down my cheeks
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Date: 2007-01-28 03:16 am (UTC)That's my favorite line as well. And I do that all the time - the "delusional commenting" thing. Maybe it's just LJ deleting them to annoy us, lol.